Rabu, 04 Mei 2011
The Trangkil Traffic Jam (Again)
On Tuesday evening, hundreds vehicle trapped on Trangkil traffic jam. It happened because there are graduation ceremony in Unnes and diverted road from Kalipancur bridge to Dewi Sartika Street. No officer controlled the traffic that day, so this traffic jam became the worst traffic jam in this three weeks. The traffic jam happened for almost four hours, from 16.00-20.00.
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This is great, Ari. You have expanded your previous paragraph. However, you've got some issues as follows:
*) hundreds vehicle --> hundreds of vehicle
*) there are graduation --> there was graduation
*) this three weeks --> these three weeks
Happy revising! :-)
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